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NoobSlayer13 Amateur
Posts : 627 Join date : 2010-06-06 Location : In your mind!!
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Sat Jan 15, 2011 10:47 pm | |
| redgar i dont have much to say just 4 words... YOUR STORY WAS AWESOME ;) | |
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redgar Administrator
Posts : 1404 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : salonica FTW
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:17 am | |
| o_O guys thnx a lot i rly didint think it was that good tbh xD But anyway i ll do my best to writte faster(ent corektli for mystair Stefff :p ) | |
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aris Experienced
Posts : 516 Join date : 2010-05-26
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:09 am | |
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redgar Administrator
Posts : 1404 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : salonica FTW
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:02 am | |
| Chapter 4:
Redgar had just finished axplaining what happened last night to Iverson.
Iverson: They outsmarted us. We underestimated them. Redgar: It's all my fault. I shouldn't have let him escape. Iverson: It's alright it's not your fault. Anyways you have to leave immidiately to find Pamela and MissTaylor and talk with them. Redgar: To whom should I go first? And where does Pamela live? Iverson: You should first visit Pamela. She lives in Hollywood. 12th street 7th hight. Redgar: Understood. I ll be on my way. Iverson: Thanks Redgar I am counting on you.
Redgar turned and exited. Instead of going to his dorm he went to the brionac blue to say goodbys to Winduct. Upon reaching there though Chazz informed him he was already gone. So he went to his dorm took his things and left the academy...
Meanwhile...
Steff: Excellent job Chaos excellent. Go wash yourself and clean your wounds Chaos: Yes master.
As he left Steff examined the body. You thought i wouldnt get you Vem? he thought.
Steff: Shock are we ready? Shock: Yes let's begin the procidure....
A few days later...
Ding Dang
Redgar knocked the door of an enormous house located in the middle of Holywood. Holy crap Vem had such a huge house and such a sexy wife and he chose to leave these things to come in our academy? He must have been crazy. A tall bold man opened the door
Man: Hello how can i help you? Redgar: I am here to see Mrs Pamela? Man: You have an appointment? Redgar: Um no i don't think so Man: Then i am afraid i cannot allow you through Redgar: Can you tell her Redgar wants to speak with her?
The man examined him from tip to toe.
Man: I ll be right back
After about 5 minutes Redgar shaw the bold man return.
Man: Follow me.
He followed him inside the house. He looked around. The sight was marvellous. There was a staircase in front of them and an elavator to his right side. Beautiful curtains were in place in front of the windows. They antered the elvator. Amazed Redgar saw the building had 12 floors. The man pressed the floor number 6. When they reached their destination the elavator stopped. The exited. Once again Redgar was amazed by what he saw. THe man walked towards a room. When he reached the door he turned and spoke to Redgar.
Man: Here enter. My lady is waiting for you inside Redgar: Thank you
Redgar stepped inside. He saw Pamela sitting in her office. She was wearing a long black dress.
Pamela: Hello Redgar welcome to my humble house. That feels so empty without him...
Without a warning she started crying.
Redgar: Um....um... come on dont cry...
She got up and hugged Redgar
Pamela: Oh Redgar i owe you so much thank you for everything you have done for my husband. Redgar: Um sure my pleasure
Pamela let go of him and returned to her desk. Red was as red as a tomato.
Pamela: So Redgar what brings you here? Redgar: I have toask you some questions about Vem Pamela: Sure go on i ll try to help you as much as i can Redgar: OK so first of all. What do you know about Mooryan Curry? Pamela: I knew you'd ask me about this. Please sit down i have quite a few things to tell you Redgar: Ok begin when you are ready
Pamela took a big breath wiped the tears of her eyes and began talking with a steady voice
Pamela: It was several years ago when Vem went on this expedition when he came back he was a different man. He hid in his room for hours daily and only got out to eat. He never spoke of what he was doing when 8 years ago he said he is leaving and he found a job as an academies headmaster. Your academy SDA. I didnt know what to say i was shocked when I heard that but there was nothing I could do to change his mind. So he left. When he did I went and searched his room. All i found were notes that had confusing symbols on them. But in one of them there was a cycled symbol that wrotte this is it below it. Filled with curiosity i went and asked an archeologist about the meaning of this symbol and told me it means ressurection. I left even more confused. Ressurection? What about it could Vem possibly search. So 2 years later I decided it was enough and i asked him what was the meaning of all this. He avoid to answer me claiming i would be in danger if I knew. I insisted though and managed to get some information from his best friend and partner Iverson. He told that in the expedition Vem found a yugioh card called Mooryan Curry. You can imagine how i felt? Yugioh? What is this I asked. When he answered that it was a card game i was just shocked. Vem spent all this hours in his game for a card game? And then Iverson told me something even now i do not believe
She paused.
Redgar: What did he say? Pamela: He said that that ordinary Yugioh card can bring people back to life....
THE END
NEXT CHAPTER: Ambush! | |
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vem123 zettaisha seigi
Posts : 1823 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : America
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:10 am | |
| Next chapter should be ''Sex with Pamela''
Cool chapter KIU :) . IMA BE RESSURECTED AND THEN I WILL FIRE MY LAZOOOORS AND CONQUER THE WORLD. MUAHAHA | |
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redgar Administrator
Posts : 1404 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : salonica FTW
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Sun Jan 16, 2011 11:03 am | |
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Terraplant Intermediate
Posts : 758 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : Hugging Creepers from Minecraft
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Mon Jan 17, 2011 3:45 am | |
| It sounded like the script of a porn movie. Pretty boy goes to sad widow's house,widow cries,pretty boy comforts her,card games on motorcycles. | |
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NoobSlayer13 Amateur
Posts : 627 Join date : 2010-06-06 Location : In your mind!!
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Mon Jan 17, 2011 6:08 am | |
| yea indeed it sounds like a porn movie :P well it will be if you have redgar (the character at chapter not you :P) to have sex with her :O anyway excelent job once again ;) | |
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Stef Administrator
Posts : 660 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : Greece
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Mon Jan 17, 2011 12:45 pm | |
| - vem123 wrote:
- Next chapter should be ''Sex with Pamela''
Cool chapter KIU :) . IMA BE RESSURECTED AND THEN I WILL FIRE MY LAZOOOORS AND CONQUER THE WORLD. MUAHAHA If my character was smarter than how smart redgar wants him to be, he would not sit there and act as a plot device. After the examination of your dead body he would cut you in 5 10 200 9999 pieces and spread them around planet earth, if not sending some of the pieces out of our planet's orbit. That way, I'm pretty sure you will not be able to get resurrected. Anyways, good job once again, less mistakes than before, and you spelled Stef correctly (most of the time). I said it before, and I'll say it again, Vem does not deserve Pamela as a wife :P | |
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vem123 zettaisha seigi
Posts : 1823 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : America
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Mon Jan 17, 2011 12:58 pm | |
| Maybe your character will brainwash Pamela and then we could have tr...
nvm ._. | |
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redgar Administrator
Posts : 1404 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : salonica FTW
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Mon Jan 17, 2011 1:15 pm | |
| Hahaha +1 Terra and Vem lol xD :o i wrotte Stef instead of Steff? I ll correct it at once :P @myst: - Spoiler:
i assure you real life redgar would like to be the chapter Redgar and have se.. a converstaion with Pamela :P
And the reason i used Pamela is that we have no girls in this nerdy academy anymore :P | |
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Terraplant Intermediate
Posts : 758 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : Hugging Creepers from Minecraft
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Mon Jan 17, 2011 2:02 pm | |
| Even if we had one,she would be offended if you made her Vem's wife! | |
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redgar Administrator
Posts : 1404 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : salonica FTW
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Mon Jan 17, 2011 2:47 pm | |
| Damt Terra you got 2 of my +1's in less than 2 hours. You re my hero :D | |
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vem123 zettaisha seigi
Posts : 1823 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : America
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:39 am | |
| - Quote :
- Even if we had one,she would be offended if you made her Vem's wife!
I went to -1 this but i just couldn't :P. So +1 ._. Sex Warrior Discard 1 ''Junk'' card from your hand to the Graveyard. Have *CENSORED* with Pamela gg | |
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redgar Administrator
Posts : 1404 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : salonica FTW
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:20 am | |
| Hahahaha epic :D
Ok now stop spamming this....seriously :P
SteFF put them in order plz :) | |
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iNoobishh New Member
Posts : 118 Join date : 2010-12-17 Location : Neverland.
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Sat Jan 22, 2011 5:23 am | |
| Where is me? or Iverson? :( | |
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redgar Administrator
Posts : 1404 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : salonica FTW
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:37 am | |
| Chapter 5They taxi was moving across the city street. Winduct looked out of the window.He recognised this neighbor. He had grown up here.Winduct: You can stop here. The cab driver stopped asked them to pay and then Winduct and Deathsky exitedDeathsky: So is this the place? Winduct: Yes it is Winduct looked up his old house. He hadnt come in here for about 3 years now. Both of them walked inside the yard. Winduct knocked the bell. After about 1 minute someone opened the door.WInduct: Hey bro Terraplant: Oh my Winduct what brings you here? Is everything ok? Winduct: Not exactly. First of all meet Deathsky. As you may have heard Steff escaped prison. Iverson believes he will launch an attack against SDA. That's why he wants us to gather the elite 3 so that we ll have a chance against them. Terraplant: I see. Deathsky thank you for accompanying Winduct here but i am afraid i ll have to ask you to return to the academy. Deathsky: But why? Terraplant: I want you to give Iverson a message. Tell him "The project is finished" Winduct and Deathsky looked at him puzzledWinduct: What do you mean project... Terraplant: Not now. Later. Deathsky i d advise you to leave immidiately. Winduct you come inside i ll pack my stuff and we ll go to Blaze's house Winduct: Ok Deathsky: I ll be on my way too. Good luck to both of you Meanwhile...Redgar: Whhhaaatttt??? Ressurect people? For real? Pamela: I am afraid yes. Redgar: Oh oh i think i know what Steff is planning. Anyways thanks for your time Pamela i ll go now every minute counts Pamela: Feel free to come here whenever you want Redgar. Once again thank you. Goodbye and good luck. She escorted him outside the huge mansion. Redgar waved goodbye. What she said still rang in his ears. Ressurection? For real? No it couldnt be true. Well there is one way to find out.... Meanwhile...Back at the academy...Ace:....so everyone that wants to participate in the Fast Tournament please leave your names at your dorm leaders Mystirious,Fatal and Teise. When Ace finished his speech he resigned to the elite 3 mansion. He was too tired. Still he couldnt rest. he needed to find Proffessor Fallen King later today to give him the names of the participants. He saw the door open and Chazz coming inChazz: Hey Ace: Oh hi Chazz Chazz: YOu know i never got the chance to actually apologise about what happened last year in the fast Tournament... Flashback:- Spoiler:
When last year Ace wanted to participate in the tournament Chazz and his gang mocked him and Chazz himself humiliated him in a duel
Ace: No dont worry about it Chazz: Good to know He offered his hand and Ace accepted it.They spent the rest of the evening dueling and talking about the current situation...Meanwhile....Shock: Sir it's complete he will wake up as soon as we have the pieces. Steff: Good my agents are already on their way. Now go rest a bit your eyes have black circles.And fetch me Chaos Shock: Yessir Meanwhile...Redgar was walking in the dark roads of California. He knew the prison was about 10 kilometres away. He was tired from all the walking but he couldnt rest. He continued down the dark alley. He heard a noise and turned around. He saw a man walking the opposite side of him. Feeling anxious he continued walking. When they met the man passed by him. Phew, thought Redgar. Then he froze as he felt a gun in his head. A strange voice saidVoice: If you want your life leave your deck and the pieces on the floor. Not having much of a choice Redgar obeyed. Then he felt a strike in his head and fainted....The end NEXT CHAPTER: ANSWERS AND QUESTIONS | |
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Terraplant Intermediate
Posts : 758 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : Hugging Creepers from Minecraft
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:43 am | |
| Ressurection? In my Yugimonz fanfic? Sounds awesome! | |
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synchrowarrior318 Amateur
Posts : 99 Join date : 2010-12-13 Location : Australia
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Thu Jan 27, 2011 2:55 am | |
| mad chapter, although redgar is one of the main characters so therefore he is not allowed to die :D | |
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NoobSlayer13 Amateur
Posts : 627 Join date : 2010-06-06 Location : In your mind!!
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:57 am | |
| that is awsome!!!! nc nc i think and i hope i will play bigger role at the upcoming chapters :D | |
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Blaze Experienced
Posts : 319 Join date : 2010-05-05 Location : Greece,Salonica
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Thu Jan 27, 2011 7:59 am | |
| yay i will be back to kill ya b***hes! :P | |
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Winduct Moderator
Posts : 1428 Join date : 2010-06-11 Location : Greece
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Thu Jan 27, 2011 9:52 am | |
| I just read all the chapters I had missed. I like the dark atmosphere. The only thing I don't like at the moment is that there are too many characters and too many diffrent storylines happening. Also Pamela talks alot. I also found the end of hapter 5 interesting. | |
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aris Experienced
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| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Thu Jan 27, 2011 11:03 am | |
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Stef Administrator
Posts : 660 Join date : 2010-05-04 Location : Greece
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Thu Jan 27, 2011 12:17 pm | |
| Was that a rapist in the dark alley? O.o You never know...
Nice chapter, just one thing : I don't think you can actually fetch a person to someone :P | |
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vem123 zettaisha seigi
Posts : 1823 Join date : 2010-05-02 Location : America
| Subject: Re: The Junk Chronicles season 2 Chapter 22 (NEW) Fri Jan 28, 2011 4:29 am | |
| OMFG THE MAIN"S CHARACTERS CHILDRENS CARDS WERE STOLEN. WHAT AN AWSUM PLOT :D
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